Fwd: feedback on second draft

[Phillip Mills]

This is a comment from my wife who, as she writes below, has been  
involved in RFI processes from both sides for quite some time.

Begin forwarded message:

> From: Jane Garthson <jane-7jO6JrwjjrgK13rTOXNulNJt68S7WPzz at public.gmane.org>
>
> Evan, you don't know me but my husband, Phil Mills, belongs to tlug  
> and knows I write reports and answer RFIs and RFPs.  And I strongly  
> support the values of Open Source.
>
> The document is very well written.  However, it starts with a  
> strong negative, which will discourage the civil servants involved  
> (I spent 21 years in government).  An opening paragraph that is  
> fully positive (congratulating them on asking the questions, on  
> considering Open Source, on seeking to maximize value obtained for  
> resources, etc.) will make the following clarifications much more  
> palatable.
>
> Jane Garthson
> http://www.garthsonleadership.ca
> 416-512-6765
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