Fwd: feedback on second draft

[Evan Leibovitch]

Phillip Mills wrote:
>> However, it starts with a strong negative, which will discourage the
>> civil servants involved (I spent 21 years in government).  An opening
>> paragraph that is fully positive (congratulating them on asking the
>> questions, on considering Open Source, on seeking to maximize value
>> obtained for resources, etc.) will make the following clarifications
>> much more palatable.
This is excellent feedback and I only wish I'd had it a few hours ago
since the deadline was 2pm today.
Could Jane comment if there is any point or advantage in re-submitting
after the deadline?

- Evan

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