Linux World Updates

Jamon Camisso jamon.camisso-H217xnMUJC0sA/PxXw9srA at public.gmane.org
Thu Mar 30 16:15:35 UTC 2006


Colin McGregor wrote:
> --- Scott Elcomb <psema4-Re5JQEeQqe8AvxtiuMwx3w at public.gmane.org> wrote:
>> On 3/30/06, Colin McGregor <colinmc151-bJEeYj9oJeDQT0dZR+AlfA at public.gmane.org>
>> wrote:
>> Oh, I so hate to do this...  Colin, looks like
>> you've got an off-by-one error:
>>
>> "The Greater Toronto Area Linux User [Group] is the
>> voice of"
>>
>> Adding the word group takes it to 51 words.  I'm
>> tired and seeing
>> double at the moment so it might be my count that's
>> off.
> 
> Your right, here is a revised version, still at 50
> words (I found a different word I could drop :-) ).
> 
> -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
> The Greater Toronto Area Linux User Group is the voice
> of Toronto area Linux users. We run three monthly
> meetings, offering a mix of education, and
> interpersonal networking. Whether you are a new user
> or a seasoned professional we can help you. Check us
> out on the web at: http://www.gtalug.org
> -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-

Those handy gerunds. Mightn't taking the comma out after education make 
the mix see a little more like a mix instead of two separate elements? 
Because you aren't offering a list of more than 3 items, the comma is 
unnecessary.

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