installfest poster

John McGregor mr.mcgregor-bJEeYj9oJeDQT0dZR+AlfA at public.gmane.org
Tue Aug 9 13:27:40 UTC 2005


>
>
>Curious about Linux but do not know where to start? Ever wanted to play with
>Linux but had problems getting it installed? This is your chance to have a
>volunteer from the GTALug (Greater Toronto Area Linux User Group) guide you
>through the available options and help you to install Linux on your
>computer.
>
I'd change the word "play" in the first line to "experiment" or "try out" etc. In the
original context "play" could infer a toy-like quality to some potential users. I don't
think that this is the message we want to send.

John

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